I’ll go into hiding where you wont see me.
Where my shadows are pure darkness
Where my smile will be light
and my breath: life.
I’ll go into hiding and I will flee.
Like a caterpillar on a cocoon
I’ll hide inside
So your thoughts wont bother me
I’ll leave all the hurt, the misery
On floating people’s realm.
So that after the rain,
I can say that the rainbow removed my pain.
I’ll go hiding and lurk on somebody else’s erms
Where fishes are salmons and gems are diamonds.
I’ll go into hiding where I am nobody.
Unlike the butterflies, I need more time to be free,
Three months, give me three months,
And I will be me.
lovely piece….
how are you?
Merry Christmas!
let me know if you accept the perfect poet award for week 34…welcome join poets rally week 35.
thanks Ji. linked it already!
Happy holidays!
xoxo,
B
excellent write 🙂
this is the second poem im reading
where life and happiness is associated to the butterfly
good job 🙂
Thanks for reading dear!
I really appreciate it.
Im glad you like it.
Happy holidays!
=)
xoxo,
B
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gr8 piece of work
Here’s my poetry
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/12/10/love-is/
!! Happy Rally !!
thanks dear! Appreciate much!
Kisses,
B
I really felt you and your desires in this poem. I have been where you were in this poem before and you describe that place well.
thanks hun!
Glad you liked it.
Xoxo,
B
Very strong emotions and a desire to be you again…
I like your poem very much 🙂
Beautiful pic too 🙂
Thanks dear! I miss the old me. 😦
Love,
B
I love this poem. I relate to it on many levels. Well done.
Thanks for the read Dear!
Kisses,
B
Emotional and sad piece, very well-written. The last lines were amazing:
“Three months, give me three months,
And I will be me.”
thanks dear.
Lately, I am writing sad posts. Dunno why.
B
You captured something that is sometimes really hard to capture… a desire for space, a desire to think freely, a desire to just be…
exactly.
even I can’t find the words to describe it.
Thanks for the read Hun!
Kisses,
B
A metamorphosis that is so naturally compelling and well-depicted:)
Wow.
I appreciate this sooo much.
Thanks for the read!
B
I think this is one of my very favorites of today. Good job!
Thanks so much Dear!
Much appreciated. 🙂
Love,
B
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let me know after you are done:
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#2: commented for 18 poets NEW to you,
Happy Saturday!
Blessings!
Thanks form the contribution!
Will do Ji.
thanks!
B
wow..heart wrenching emotions and the state in which i myself am, i think your poem was made just for me…thank you…
wow.
well, this is for you then.
🙂
XOXO,
B
There is a slight hint of Emily Dickinson in this- do you read much of her work?
oh is there?
I have read some, yes.
hahah
I hope you liked this.
xOxo,
B
Yep, this mortal coil stuff’s a bugger, eh? I like your idea of metamorphing LOTS better than shuffling off…
Nicely done!
exactly.
thanks dear. glad you got my point!
Love,
B
It’s beautiful. Merry Christmas B.
thank you dear.
Happy holidays too!
Love,
B
Oh my! A poem we can all relate to Bixxx. Nicely writtin. You okay?
Hope that you are having a Happy Holiday!
Thanks love.
As much as I want to lie and tell you I’m okay and I’m enjoying my holidays, I can’t.
Being away from my family during this season, yeah, I’m pretty much over that, it’s been years that I am not celebrating with them. But to celebrate Xmas and New Year without my friends, well, that’s a different story.
Am just really sad. 😦
But hey, at least I’ve got a good job right?
We can’t have it all. 😦
Thanks again for passin thru hun!
Kisses,
B
I loved your poem my friend. I think everyone can relate to it…I know I can. I loved your wording and the great imagery you used. Well done my friend!
thanks dear!
im glad you liked it.
and thanks for reading too!
xoxo,
B
Beautiful! Thank you for providing me with the link – I’ve now subscribed via email so I won’t miss a word! And thank you so much for visiting and commenting at my blog. ♥♥♥
wow. thanks dear.
this is really appreciated.
im glad you like it.
Kisses,
B
Thanks for this B. I can feel the pain.
Thanks for dropping by my blog. Hope to read more from you.
Happy Holidays.
Thanks dear!
Sa Manila ka din ba? 🙂
B
I find all your work and this poem especially very relatable.
you depict emotions very well 🙂 well dome to you!
Wow. that’s great! Thanks dear.
Im glad you liked it.
B
…I’ll leave all the hurt, the misery
On floating people’s realm.
So that after the rain,
I can say that the rainbow removed my pain…
…like those lines…felt.
thanks dear. 🙂
Love,
B
The end made me smile ^_^ Hopefully after 3 months a beautiful butterfly is born.
i hope so too! 🙂
Beautiful. Btw love the snow.
thanks hun.
glad you liked it! 🙂
Love,
B
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well written… descriptive imagery
This was wonderful B–you write from your heart. I can feel it.
Happy New Year to you!
Gayle xoxo
thanks Gayle! 🙂
Happy New Year!
Love,
B