HIDING ME

Posted: December 13, 2010 in POETRY
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I’ll go into hiding where you wont see me.
Where my shadows are pure darkness
Where my smile will be light
and my breath: life.

I’ll go into hiding and I will flee.
Like a caterpillar on a cocoon
I’ll hide inside
So your thoughts wont bother me
I’ll leave all the hurt, the misery
On floating people’s realm.
So that after the rain,
I can say that the rainbow removed my pain.

I’ll go hiding and lurk on somebody else’s erms
Where fishes are salmons and gems are diamonds.
I’ll go into hiding where I am nobody.
Unlike the butterflies, I need more time to be free,
Three months, give me three months,
And I will be me.

Comments
  1. Jingle says:

    lovely piece….

    how are you?

    Merry Christmas!
    let me know if you accept the perfect poet award for week 34…welcome join poets rally week 35.

  2. dancingfreak says:

    excellent write🙂

    this is the second poem im reading

    where life and happiness is associated to the butterfly

    good job🙂

  3. ashbeezone says:

    gr8 piece of work
    Here’s my poetry
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/12/10/love-is/
    !! Happy Rally !!

  4. Shamika says:

    I really felt you and your desires in this poem. I have been where you were in this poem before and you describe that place well.

  5. Sumit Sarkar says:

    Very strong emotions and a desire to be you again…
    I like your poem very much🙂
    Beautiful pic too🙂

  6. L says:

    I love this poem. I relate to it on many levels. Well done.

  7. Emotional and sad piece, very well-written. The last lines were amazing:
    “Three months, give me three months,
    And I will be me.”

  8. orange says:

    You captured something that is sometimes really hard to capture… a desire for space, a desire to think freely, a desire to just be…

  9. A metamorphosis that is so naturally compelling and well-depicted:)

  10. Glory says:

    I think this is one of my very favorites of today. Good job!

  11. Jingle says:

    how are you?
    let me know after you are done:
    #1: return favor to poets who are here,
    #2: commented for 18 poets NEW to you,
    Happy Saturday!
    Blessings!
    Thanks form the contribution!

  12. Tweety says:

    wow..heart wrenching emotions and the state in which i myself am, i think your poem was made just for me…thank you…

  13. SeaGlass says:

    There is a slight hint of Emily Dickinson in this- do you read much of her work?

  14. Thea says:

    Yep, this mortal coil stuff’s a bugger, eh? I like your idea of metamorphing LOTS better than shuffling off…

    Nicely done!

  15. meirozavian says:

    It’s beautiful. Merry Christmas B.

  16. Oh my! A poem we can all relate to Bixxx. Nicely writtin. You okay?

    Hope that you are having a Happy Holiday!

    • B says:

      Thanks love.
      As much as I want to lie and tell you I’m okay and I’m enjoying my holidays, I can’t.
      Being away from my family during this season, yeah, I’m pretty much over that, it’s been years that I am not celebrating with them. But to celebrate Xmas and New Year without my friends, well, that’s a different story.
      Am just really sad.😦

      But hey, at least I’ve got a good job right?

      We can’t have it all.😦

      Thanks again for passin thru hun!

      Kisses,
      B

  17. ghosterb says:

    I loved your poem my friend. I think everyone can relate to it…I know I can. I loved your wording and the great imagery you used. Well done my friend!

  18. dani says:

    Beautiful! Thank you for providing me with the link – I’ve now subscribed via email so I won’t miss a word! And thank you so much for visiting and commenting at my blog. ♥♥♥

  19. chaspalette says:

    Thanks for this B. I can feel the pain.
    Thanks for dropping by my blog. Hope to read more from you.
    Happy Holidays.

  20. TC says:

    I find all your work and this poem especially very relatable.
    you depict emotions very well🙂 well dome to you!

  21. dasuntoucha says:

    …I’ll leave all the hurt, the misery
    On floating people’s realm.
    So that after the rain,
    I can say that the rainbow removed my pain

    …like those lines…felt.

  22. wasabiway says:

    The end made me smile ^_^ Hopefully after 3 months a beautiful butterfly is born.

  23. lmcgregor says:

    Beautiful. Btw love the snow.

  24. […] B: https://thisisbrixx.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/hiding-me/ […]

  25. well written… descriptive imagery

  26. Bodhirose says:

    This was wonderful B–you write from your heart. I can feel it.

    Happy New Year to you!

    Gayle xoxo

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