crying.lying.dead

Posted: January 4, 2012 in POETRY
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All of this broken melody
Symphony
Flying towards a dark eternity
Oh, why can’t we be
Together in a perfect harmony
Come with me,
Fly with me
Or just leave me hanging in this lost memory
Crying.
Lying.
Dead.

Comments
  1. Natalie says:

    love this, smiles.

    Happy New Year.

  2. Taylor says:

    sad, very eloquent imagery on dark side.

    masterful delivery.

  3. Well done. A nice way to talk about harmony.

  4. Fire and Ice says:

    oh, i adore this–there’s a piteous sound to it, like a kitten mewling, but also a darkness.
    you found the right words for your melody!
    ~FireandIce
    Thanks for dropping by!

  5. great beginning to be part of us,

    Incredible piece,

    Hope all is well,
    Appreciated your support along the way,
    Welcome sharing a random piece with us today,

    You rock.
    Keep it up.
    xoxox

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