Posted: January 4, 2012 in POETRY
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All of this broken melody
Flying towards a dark eternity
Oh, why can’t we be
Together in a perfect harmony
Come with me,
Fly with me
Or just leave me hanging in this lost memory

  1. Natalie says:

    love this, smiles.

    Happy New Year.

  2. Taylor says:

    sad, very eloquent imagery on dark side.

    masterful delivery.

  3. Well done. A nice way to talk about harmony.

  4. Fire and Ice says:

    oh, i adore this–there’s a piteous sound to it, like a kitten mewling, but also a darkness.
    you found the right words for your melody!
    Thanks for dropping by!

  5. great beginning to be part of us,

    Incredible piece,

    Hope all is well,
    Appreciated your support along the way,
    Welcome sharing a random piece with us today,

    You rock.
    Keep it up.

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